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Old 07-06-2008, 03:07 PM
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You're quite good, Adam! Just try to keep the "you" as the character...

As you try to enter the camp, a magical barrier cut your escape route, encircling the empty clearing... The camp was an illusion! You vainly try to go throught the barrier, with no success. A vague of exhaustion takes you, making you fall on the ground...
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